Unmemorable moment

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Hiii friends…
This my new story.
Story loki velthe….
Mathu ga padukuntunna…
Sudden ga na face meeda sunlight padetappatiki melakuva vachindi..
Edurugunda satya.kitiki curtains open chesthunnadu.akkadinundi vachinde a kanthi.
“Enti…Nidra chedakoduthunnav.plz close chey..”antu duppata faceki addam petti annanu.
“Time 11 avuthundi..
Inka aa baddakam enti lee…”antu duppatta lagaboyadu satya.
Inthalo..
“Idi baddakam kaadu..
Alasata neersam…”anna bungamoothipetti.
“Enduko….Antha alasata”antu vachi na pakkana kurchunnadu chethilo glass tho…
“Em neeku teliyada..Kaaranam.”anna kontega thana nunugu meesalu thadumuthu.
“Naku telusu..
But nee notitho vindamani aasa” annadu na chethiki glass andisthu.
“Emitidi..?”glass chetiloki teesukuntu adiga..
“Na prema.”annadu navvuthu.
“Oh…”annanu navvuthu.
“Em navvuthav na maata egathaliga unda”annadu konchem chinnabuchukuntu.
“Ooruko..Ninnu atapattidamani anna” annanu glass lo milk thaaguthu.
“Aina nuvvu navvithe bhale untav”annadu na face thana rendu chethulatho bandinchi.
“Kaani nenu navvithe nuvvu feel avuthunna ga” annanu chilipi ga
“Eesari nundi feel avanule…
I love you raaa”antu na pedalanu thana pedalatho andukunnadu..
Chala seepu saagindi ma iruvuri adharala chumbhana kaaryam.
“Ilage life antha naatho undipothava” annadu.. na kallaloki chusthu
“Em chesthav unte..”annanu.
“Neeku em lotu rakunda jeevithamtham na kallalo petti chusukunte”annadu.
Malli peddaga navvina.
“Idem joke kadu
serious..
Na gundello nundi vachina maata”annadu konchem chiru kopam chupisthu.
“Joke ani navvaledu.
Nenu nachithe baaguntundani annavga anduke …”annanu malli navvuthu.
“Sare ika lechi fressup avi raa..
Bojanam cheddam”antu bed pai nundi levaboyadu.
Inthalo thana cheyyi pattukoni venakku laganu.amantham vachi na meeda paddadu.
“Em raaa””annadu nannu kougilinchu koni
“Bojanam annavga.
Vaddidhamani” annanu thana chempalapai unna gaddam ventrukalu chinnaga nimuruthu…
“Alasi poyavga…
Rest teesuko…”annadu
“Mari nuvvu alasipoleda..
Night antha kastapadi nannu suka pettav. But early morning lechi ,
Room clean chesav,
Lunch prepare chesav,
Naakosam boost-milk teesukochav.
Ee alasata mundu aa alasata entha cheppu”anna thana faceni na faceku daggaraga teesukuntu.
“Oh alaga”antu malli na pedalu andukunnadu..
Eesari nenu kappukunna duppati lagesi kinda padesadu..
Na ontimeeda noolupogukuda ledu.
Ratri vippesinave malli vesukoledu.
Nannu daggaraku lagi thana bigi kougililo bandinchadu.
Aa sparsa paatha de aina malli kothaga anipinchindi.
Ika thana muddula parvam modalettadu. Eesari rathri kanna konchem ghatugane unnai doragari adharasanthakalu..
Aa adarasparsaku swargam loka amrutham ane padam gurthuku vachindi.
Nudhutitho modaletti arikalu varaku saginchadu muddula parampara..
Nimishallo thana deham nagnamga tayarayyindi..
Ika alasyam cheyyaka malli napai teeyani dadhiki siddam ayyadu..
Athani sparsa ku nenu maga puttuka puttanane sangathe marchipoya.
Anthala maimarapinchadu thana srungara prathibha tho…
Iddari vedi nitturpulaku gadantha ukkapothaku thattukoleka chaligalikosam kitiki vaipu aasaga chusthunnai..
Athani tho aa sukam ennisarlu pondina malli malli kothaga anipisthundi.
Athani bhahuvula kinda naligi povadam na deham chesukunna punyam anukunta.
Athani magathananni ennisarlu ruchichusina nene aa shkanam tattukoleka pothunna. Ika kothaga unna aa mancham em thattukundi.
Vaadi veganni thattukoleka chinnaga moolugu thundi.
Shkana skhananiki athani aavesam haddulu cheripesthunnayii..
Na chethulu athani chethullo bandi aipoyayi…
Na kallaloki premaga chusthu thanu chesthunna rasa yuddam nannedo lokamloki teeesukellipothundi..
Na thanuvu athani teeyyani dhadiki dasoham aipoyindi.
Athani gadasari magasiri aagadalu nannu ukkiribikkiri chesthunnai..
Aa madurashkanam alane undi povalani na manasu aratapaduthondi..
Thanaku naapai entha prema undo teliyajesthunnadu.kaani aa prema aa skhanamlo mathrame andukogalanu…
Athani teeyani dhadilo naaku alasata anipinchadu. Adi appatike kaadu eppatiki naaku jeevam unnantha varaku…
Athaniki aaratam adupu cheyyaleka vilavilaladipothunna..Kaani andhulone edo teliyani theepi hai daagundi.
Athanu thana muni panti tho chese teeyani ghayalu naku chekkiliginthalu testhu maduranubhuthi nisthunnai.
Sumaru 20nimishalu garipina teeyani yuddamlo thanu nannu oodinchaledu.
Thanatho paatu nannu gelipinchadu.
Athaniki aavesam challari naapai vaali poyadu.
Na kallaloki thrupthi tho kudina thana chupula bhanalu visuruthu pakkaku vaali poyadu.
Ika nannu thana gundela paiki teesukoni naa thala nimuruthu malli premaga adigadu thanatho undipommani..
But na kantlo edo theliyani avedana pongukochindi thana maatalaku.
Thanu chala manchi vadu..
Thana jeevithamlo vere oka ammai undi. valla premaku prathirupamga oka bangaru thalli oopiriposukundi.
Naapai kuripinche prema naaku mathrame sonthamavvalane korika naalo kalipithe aa chinna kutumbam vichinnam anipisthundi ga….
Athani premalo nijayithi,bhadyatha unnai.but avi ponde sthanamlo nenu lenu.nene kaadu, nalanti chala mandi aa sthananni andukoleru.
Athani premanu vadukolenu,kaani a aa prema an dukunte, jeevithamlo papam chesinavadni avuthanu..
Anduke aa premanu kadanukunnanu. Lopala kavalani unna aa dhairyam cheyyaleka poya.
Thanatho gadipina prathishkanam oka marapurani shkanam.
Aa anubhuthulu teepi gurthuku ga eppatiki na madilo ne undi pothayi.
Thanu na kallaloki chusthu thana premanu vyaktham chesadu.but nenu aa dhairyam cheyyaleka thana cheyi pattukoni premanu thiraskarinchi vachesa..
But naapai thanaku, thana pai naaku ippatiki prema chekkuchedaraledu.
Ma premaku chalasarlu chala hotel gadulu vedekkai,chala manchalu arichayi,chala shkanalu thananu thamu marchipoyina shkanalu unnai
So friends..
Ilanti vallu chala arudu ga untaru like my satya.vaallaku oka jeevitham untundi.mana swardam kosam valla jeevitham chinnabinnam cheyalem.varu ontarivaraithe vaalaki thodu avadam.ade vallu vere commitment lo unte just valla sukam mathrame alochiddam…
Comments plzz
Catch me at mk9131844@gmail.com

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    • Veera on January 28, 2020 at 5:50 pm
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    NIce but edipinchesav dear

    • vega on January 29, 2020 at 3:51 pm
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    Story narration and command on language is tooo good

    • akhil on January 29, 2020 at 10:15 pm
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    bro mi story chadvtunte na gatha kala gamanam loki tedikeliidi bhahusha na jivitame e kadhaku adharam but appatiki na life na chetulo lekapoindi prema ga prema kosam chusina a khanamlo na jivitam inthe anukuna but vadentha narakam anubhavinchado ippatiki anubhavistunado ippudu ardam aindi😭

      • Mahesh on January 30, 2020 at 4:39 am
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      Thanks..Bro
      Ippatikaina thana bhadanu ardam chesukunnadu ku.nuvvu thananu ardamchesukunnav ippatikaina.
      Thanks alot….

        • akhil on January 31, 2020 at 8:02 am
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        kani labam lekunda poindi na chivari rojulo na bangaram kalsukovalani undi but na durtustam kalskune adurustam lekkapoindi vadiki e sites lo story chadavadam istam so i wanna share my love story with u

  1. U r great bro
    Edipinchesav story tho
    Kondaru Love kosam wait chestunaa
    Adhi dakkadam ledu
    Even me also but love is great
    Chaala edupu vastundi.😥

      • Mahesh Kumar on March 13, 2020 at 3:10 pm
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      Thanks .bro

    • Suresh on April 2, 2020 at 1:31 am
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    Nice bro same story running in my life wt can I do

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