Pellilo parichayam-1

Hi friends na peru ajay (kaadulendi alaantide)
First time na experience ni katha la raastunna
Samayam enduku vrdha cheyadam first time kabatti kaasta time taking untundi em anukokandi detail ga cheppali kadaa

2 years back experience idi 10th class mate pelliki vellanu tappakundaa raavali ani chaala saarlu request chesaadu so baaga ready ayyi inka iddaru friends tho kalisi vellaa pelliki adi chaala chinna village night 11 daatindi vellesariki daggarlo unna town ki pelli car vachindi mammalni receive cheskodaaniki ooriki cherukunnam ika night town lone dinner chesi vacham so vaallu request chesinaa tinaledu 12 daatindi pellikoduku tho maatallo padi
Tana vere friends kudaa chala mandi vachaaru
Antaga introduce cheskoledu alasipoyam journey chesi so first padukodaaniki place kosam waiting inthalo oka uncle vachi friends andariki oka separate illu chupinchaadu kaasta dooram pelli intiki ala andaram naduchukuntune veltunnam nenu sarigga observe cheyaledu evvarini aa thought kuda ledu boys tho ala cheyalani inthalo venaka nundi voice rey maama nannu vadilipetti potaaraara nenu vastunna aagandi ani run cheskuntu vastunnadu tirigi chusaa look like a hero personality same as me tanalaage untaa nen kudaa so ekkado connect ayyadu chudagaane chaala crazy person and sens of humor superb I’m silent and cool guy ala tana jokes tho aa intiki cherukunnam andaru navvukuntoo memu oka 15 members unnam but 2 little rooms illu adi nen inkaa tanane observe chestunna emi pattichkokundaa migataa vaallantaa place booking cheskunnattu padukunnaru tanemo washroom ki velladu cheppadam marchipoya hi name is kaarthik

 

Reason for rejection : very short and incomplete