TITLE – THOLI PREMA
PART 1
Few years back….
saayamtram 7:30 ayyindi… maemu samayaaniki railway station cherukunnaamu. kalisi gadapadaaniki araganta samayam undi… station chala raddeegaa undi. Atu itu kadhuluthu evari lokam lo varu parugulu theesthunnaru.. nenu kuda na aalochanalo munigi poyunna.. prati nimisham gadichaekoddee, naa kallu munupati nimisham kantae tadigaa maaraayi.. na manasuloni alajadini grahinchi prati nimisham tanu tana kallaloni noppini daachadaaniki prayatnistoo nannu odaarchadaaniki prayatninchaadu.. anthatitho edhi mugisipovadam ledhani… antham kaadani nannu utsaahaparichaenduku prayatninchaadu. kaanee naa hrudhayam inkaedo chebutoonae undi…..
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madhyaahnam 1:30 PM
maa pareekshala mugimpuku chaerukunnanduna maemu hostel lo kalisi undataaniki chivari roju adi. anni ibbandulanu adhigaminchi, atanu tana chivari pareekshanu taelikagaa poorti chaeyagaligaadani naenu santoshamgaa unnappatikee, maemu konni gantallo vidipovaalsi untundani telusukovadam valla naa chirunavvunu ekkuvasaepu unchalaekapoyaanu. maemu ikapai kalisi samayam gadapalaemu, maemu kalisi nidrapolaemu, naenu nidristunnappudu naenu atanini inka kaugilinchukolaenu mariyu naenu nidrapotunnappudu naa medapai atani Shvaasanu inka anubhavinchalaenu, atani Chaatipai tala vaalchi nidurinchae samayam vinapadae atani gunde chappudu ika vini aanandinchalaenu.. naenu atani muddulannintinee miss avutaanu…. naenu atanito maatlaadakapoyinaa kopamlo unna nannu bujjaginchae teeruni miss avutaanu, naaloni prati anuvu atanni miss avutundi, atanito samayam gadapaalani aaraaTapaDutuMdi ani naaku telusu.. ediemaina…..
“Aravind” atani pilupu vinnappudu naenu naa aalochanala nundi maelkoni tirigi chaalaa sandaehaalato nindi unna tana mukham choosi atani daggariki velli atani buggalanu naa chaetulloki teesukoni, “bhayapadaku! Antha manche jaruguthundhi!” ani dhairayam cheppaanu. naa maata vintoo, atanu naa nuditipai oka muddu petti, nannu gattigaa kaugilinchukunnaadu, ee exam bhayaanni baadhani marachipovadaaniki ataniki konta samayam avasaramani telisi, naenu naa aalochanalannintinee pakkaku netti “talupu inkaa terichi undi” ani kontegaa navvutu cheppi kaugilinundi vidupinchuka poyaanu, appudu tanu nannu marinta gattigaa kaugilinchukuni, “bhaaryaabhartalu talupu terichi unchi romance chaestae tappaenti?” ani naa pedavipai mudduto badulichchaadu.
maemu maa bhojanam muginchi bayaludaeradaaniki siddhangaa unnaamu. atanito kalisi ilaa cinemaki velladam idae modati saari. maemu close ayinappati nundi bayata ekkadiki vellalaedu. inni rojula taruvaata velutunnanduku santoshapadaalo laeka taruvaata vidipoyi evari ooriki vaaru vellapotunnaamu annadi talachukoni baadhapadaalo naaku ardham kaalaedu. naenu mukham kadukkovadaaniki vellaanu, tirigi vachchae sariki atanu room bayata bags teesukoni nilabadi undadam choosi chaalaa disappoint ayyaanu, endukantae maemu bayaludaerae mundu chivarisaarigaa ghaadangaa atanini muddu pettukovaalanukunnaanu. chaesaedilaeka inka maemu railway station ku bayaludaeraamu.
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Saayamtram 7:45 PM
railu platform ku chaerukundi mariyu maemu atani seatunu vetukutoo compartment loki nadichaamu, atani things akkada unchi, lopala chaalaa mandi unnanduna ventanae bayatiki vellaamu. Platform pai , padi nimishaalu, maemu atani coach daggara unna bench meeda koorchunnaamu.
naa chuttoo chaalaa noise unnappatikee, naa mind blank gaa undi.. naa manasu baadhato kaligina noppi valla nindi poyi naa manasuki nishabhdhamgaa anipistundi. chuttoo aemi jarugutundi annadi teliyaka naenu vaerae lokam lo tappipoyinattu naa manasulo aedo teliyani alajadi.
tanu nannu pilavadam vini aa Trans lanti state nundi bayataku vachchi atani vaipu choosaanu, naenu atani mukham vaipu choosina Kshanam, naa kallu kanneellato nindipoyaayi.. “idi mana jeevitamlo oka phase, indulo naenu nee pakkana undanu antae, ni pakkana laenanta maatraana mana madhya edhi maaradhu nenu ninnu marachiponu” ani nannu dhairayamgaa undamani munupati raatri cheppinadantaa naenu marachipoyi kanneellu to nindina naa kallanu choosi.. “please … aedavaddu ..” ani tanu aa vaakyaanni muginchaelpu … kanneellu naa kalla nundi kindaku jaaree paddaayi….
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saayamtram 4:00 PM
maemu bus nundi digina ventanae, maemu nadavavalasi vachchindi, appudu tanu intaku mundu eppudu chaeyani oka pani chaesaadu. nannu tana nrudayaniki daggaragaa laagi, nannu gattigaa kaugilinchukuni, naa nuditipai muddu pettadu, ataniki aemi jarigindo naaku teliyadu. evarainaa mammalni choosaaraa ani naenu gamaninchalaedu, kaanee evaroo nijangaa choodalaedu, evarainaa mammalni aa vidhangaa choodaalani mariyu maemu okarinokaru praemistunnaamani telusukovaalani naenu korukunnaanu kaanee adi jaragalaedu
maemu mall vaipu nadustunnappudu maemu chaalaa vishayaala gurinchi maatlaadaamu, aa time lo atani chaeyi naa bhujampainae unchi nannu tanaki daggara pattukoni nadichaadu. Road cross chaeyaalsi vachchinapudu tana chaeti vaellanu naa vaellaku naduma unchi naa chaetini gattigaa pattukoni naa vaipu choosi “veladaamaa?” ani tana kallatonae adigaadu.. naenu tana chaetini inka gattiga pattukoni “veladaamu” ani naa kalluto cheppanu…
alaa tanu chaeyi pattukoni nadipistoo unte naaku gaallo egirinattu anipinchindi… road cross chaesaaka koodaa tanu naa chaeyini vidichipettalaedu… “idi naaku chaalaa baagaa nachchindi” ani tana chaetilo unna naa cheyyini choopistoo cheppanu.. antae naa chaetini vadilaesi naa bhujam pai chaeyi vaesukoni nadavadam start chaesaadu.. nachchindi ani cheptae adi chaeyadam maanaesi nanu tease cheyyadamantae chaalaa ishtam tanaku.
alaa chilipi sarasaalaadutoo theatre chaerukoni seat lo koorchunnaamu. alaa koorchunna ventanae tana right hand ni naa left hand meeda unchi naa chaetini gattiga pattukunnaadu. Interval vachchaevaraku atanu naa chaetini vadalaedu.. thanu matalalo kakunda thana chethalalo na pai unna premanu choopinchevadu… alaagae maa chaetulu pattukoni sinimaa choosaamu..
cinema tarvaata maemu mall chuttoo tirigaamu tanu naaku oka tshirt konipedataa ani balavanta parachi, okadaanni select chesi naaku ichchi, “deenni try chey. Trial room lo oka photo click cheyi.. idi vaesukuntae elaa untundo choodaali” ani cheppaadu. anduku naenu ” nuvvae vachchi choosukovachchugaa ” annaanu.
“naenu ippudu ni to trail room ki vastae, manam kaneesam 25 nundi 30 minutes bayataku raakapovachchu, ikkada alaa undi” ani tana heart ni choopistoo cheppaadu. naenu atani maatalaku blush chaeyadam tappa aemee chaeyalaeka trail room vaipu nadichaanu. mall nundi railway station ki nadachi veladaam ani decide ayyi malli adae vidhamgaa tana chaetini naa bhujam pai vaesi nadavadam praarambhimchaamu.
aa roju atanu komchem different ga unnaadu, aparimitamaina praemato naa vaipu choosae kallu.. tana Sareeraaniki daggara pattukoni nadipinchadam naa bhujam pai mariyu nadumunu pattukoni nadavadam… maemu nadustunnappudu atanu nannu tana vaellato chinna pillaadilaa aadukonivvadam… atanu appudappudu tana chaeti vellato naa buggalanu nimurutoo.. naa hair ni sari chaestoo.. naa buggalani gillutoo… nannu choosi kannu kottadam… nenu shy ga feel ayyi blush chesela chala vishayalu chesadu… navvistoo.. nannu dhairayam ga undamani chaalaanae advise chaestoo.. ilaa maa lokamlo maemu prayaaninchi raddeegaa unna roadlu mariyu cheekati daarula gundaa railway station chaerukunnaamu.
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saayamtram 7:52 PM
“choodu, naenu vidaesaalaku velladam laedu, naenu vellinaa, prati nimisham manam connected ga undaettu technology undi. naenu neeku tarachu call chaestaanu, manam tarachoo kalustaamu. idi antha kastam kaadu nuvvu ilaa baadhagaa mukhaanni unchi edavaku, dayachaesi naenu vellaetappudu edavaddu, nuvvu ilaa edustoo velitae naenu prasaantangaa undalaenani neeku telusu.. telisi koodaa ilaa edistae, mari naaku koodaa ….”
naenu tala dinchukuni kanneellu tuduchukunnaanu. atanu cheppinadantaa artham chaesukunae sthitilo naenu laenu. kaanee naa kanneellanu choosi atanni vellanivvakoodadani nirnayinchukunnaanu.
railu daani gamyam vaipu parugettadaaniki siddhamgaa undi. atanu laechinappudu naa bhujaalanu pattukuni, atanito paatu nannu etti, kaugilinchukunnaadu. naenu atanini inka gattigaa kaugilinchukunnaanu mariyu naa mukhaanni atani Chaathilo daachaanu. naaku atanini kaugilinchukuni chaalaa gattiga arustoo edavaalani undi kaani tana kosamae control chaesukunna. tanu naa tala venuka bhaagamlo chaeyi vaesi nannu tana Chaathiki gattigaa pattukuni hathukunnadu.
railu nemmadigaa kadilindi. tanu talupu daggara nilabadi nannu choostoo.. “edavavaddu” ani rendu saarlu saiga chaesaadu. naenu sarae annattu naa tala oopaanu. railu daani vaegaanni penchutoo vaegangaa kadilindi. naenu platform pai akkadae nilabadi unna chotu nundi kadalalaedu, tanu koodaa aa compartment lopaliki vellalaedu, door daggara niluchunnaadu. maemu okarinokaru choosukuntoonu akkadae nilabadi unnaamu..
maa madhya dooram perigaekoddee na manasulo baadha, kallallo kanneellu koodaa perigindi. kaani avi kindaku jaarakundaa choosukunnaanu .. endukantae atanu nannu choostunnaadu .. naenu railunu choodalaenanta varaku akkadae nilabaddaanu. tanu alaanae nilabadi undi railu kanumarugaipovadam gamaninchaanu. (naenu akkadi nundi nuvvu kanumarugaipoyae varaku kadalalaedu ani next day cheppaadu) naa kaallaku evaro cheelalu kottinattu akkadae nilabaddaanu…
aa roju varaku naenu tanato gadipina kshanaalannee naa kalla mundu kadilaayi. prati nimisham gadichaekoddee naa hrudayam marinta baruvugaa maaradam nenu feel ayyaanu. ika eppudu kalustaamo.. kalisina hostel lo spend chesinattu time spend chaeyagalamo ledo.. tanaki naa meeda praema taggipotundaemo ani chaalaa prasnalu naa manasulo bhayaalugaa aavahinchaayi… naenu ooriki vellavalasina bus ekkadaaniki time avutundi.. railu koodaa vellipoyindi.. chesaedi aemi laeka bayaludaeradaamani, akkadi nundi nenu kadilaanu…. appudu naaku teliyakundaanae naa kalla nundi kanneellu edaterapi laekundaa jaaripadadam gamaninchaanu….. kaneelatho nindina kallu bhadha tho nindina hrudhayam tho na gamyam cherukovadaniki nadichanu……
(To be continued……)
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Sollu kadalanni raastharu yadavalu
Avunu bro bokka la undhi story
To emotional brother I am also faced this feeling in my life with my love ❤❤❤❤
I really loved it.While reading I felt that I’m in ur place.i really connected to it.So,pls continue this even if it was rejected by some sex seeking bitches
Story is very good pls continue and tell when will u release 2nd part
Inkoka stories rayadam waste
ikada chadive varu konchem sex feeling kosam chavtharu ilanti poramboku kadhalu vinadaniki kadhu and sollu kavithalu evadiki kavali.
Really i gotten emotional feeling while reading ur story……so please continue 2 nd part as early as possible …..💓💓💓
Good story and emotionally please continue 2nd part
Naa kallalo neelu vachay asalu superb continue
Me too had samee feeling
Please write 2nd part
Really I felt it, I wish I would like to have a love but when ill get